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Ektophase:

--- Quote from: PDDestro on January 09, 2011, 04:17:52 PM ---Misspellings on the back cover for Ektophase's Guardian Heroes custom cover:
http://www.thecoverproject.net/view.php?cover_id=11605

The errors are as follows:
"van" instead of "can"
"opponent's" instead of "opponents" (unless it is specifically talking about a singular opponent).
"6Player" instead of "6 Player"

Also, for Ektophase's Shining Force III custom cover:
http://www.thecoverproject.net/view.php?cover_id=11606

"controlable" instead of controllable

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Dang, I'll Fix those up and post some new links in this post and in my saturn post, thanks for pointing them out.
I van try to get it right this time if i can controll my typing.

edit; Actually the 6Player is like that on the real case? I guess its because its the name of the adapter, on the case its says 6Player with a little tm symbol after it so like 6Playertm multi-player adapter, Ill throw that tm in there.

edit again: its funny on the actual case it says oppenent's - also i do have an apostrophe in there, should there not be one?
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Here are the fixed ones although I'm still not sure what to do for opponent's or opponents on GH on the actual case it says oppenent's there is an apostrophe so i kept it on there. It may be right both ways since its hard to tell the context ???

http://www.ektophase.com/TG16/saturn_guardianheroes_3.jpg
http://www.ektophase.com/TG16/saturn_shiningforce3_3.jpg

PDDestro:
It is somewhat hard to tell, but, since your character gets bombarded by so many opponents, I figured it was incorrect. Either way, thanks for the quick response. :)

Arseen:
My English would say it's eitherOpponent's if evading one enemy is meant or Opponents' if evading many is meant.

I think Opponents's is anyway wrong, but English is only my second language, so all the finer points of grammar are not in my head. ;D

Vt102:

--- Quote from: Ektophase on January 14, 2011, 04:41:51 PM ---
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Here are the fixed ones although I'm still not sure what to do for opponent's or opponents on GH on the actual case it says oppenent's there is an apostrophe so i kept it on there. It may be right both ways since its hard to tell the context ???

http://www.ektophase.com/TG16/saturn_guardianheroes_3.jpg
http://www.ektophase.com/TG16/saturn_shiningforce3_3.jpg

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Updated

Ektophase:
thanks, Vt

(I apologize for dragging this on but i wouldn't mind getting it 100% correct.)

Here is the exact sentence from the original cover. (its from a bullet point list)

All Characters can jump to the foreground, middleground, and background to evade their oppenent's attacks.

this is what mine says

All characters can jump to the foreground, middleground, and background to evade their opponent's attacks.
^ I took away the capital c changed the e to an o ^

opponents
opponents'
opponent's

If anyone knows for sure I'd be happy to change it.

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