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PS2-Dot Hack and Dot Hack Liminality(anime)-NTSC
Velmeran:
http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gutrilogywipvj7.jpg -- all that's left is any text changes, and then tossing in screenshot images ;)
Settled on text, let me know if you want anything changed:
“Welcome to ‘The World’…”
It’s been nearly two years since a fire led to the destruction of “The World” MMO, but now in the year 2017 the world has been reborn as “The World R:2”. As Haseo, you must uncover the truth behind bizarre occurrences within “The World” which seem to be tied to events in reality.
It’s a dangerous journey, but you will not fight alone. Create parties, join guilds and develop new skills in order to hack “The World”.
With the servers infected with a dangerous entity it’s up to you to hunt down and destroy it before it’s two late. The danger is real. You must vanquish the evil at any costs.
New weapons, new allies and new fighting abilities await you, but even they might not be enough. What would you sacrifice to save the world?
- Powerful Customizable Weapons!
- Fierce Real Time Fighting against Advanced AI!
- Exciting and innovative storyline in a simulated MMORPG!
- Use save data from previous .hack games and across each volume!
Hero's Shade:
I know this isn't my cover, but I thought I'd point out a few changes you can make:
1. You made a typo on "too".
2. "costs" should be "cost".
3. IMO, you should move "What would you sacrifice to save the world?" down a line.
Velmeran:
Thanks for the typo catches ;) Also fixed the spacing of the summary text, should be consistant now.
Unless there's any other feedback/suggestions for change I think I'm done with it. Let me know what you're thinking Brandon (and everyone else)
Finished(?)
Brandon:
Looks great I (and my brother, for whom this is being made) Love it. I'd say it's done.
EDIT: There is a request from my brother to put Haseo's Xth form in one of those screenshots, if possible.
Velmeran:
Screenshots, ended up being the biggest annoyance of the back ;)
I grabbed too many and then had to weed down.
These are the 4 I ended up using (Alkaid is my 2nd favorite character in the game :P)
http://www.dothack.com/gu/_images/screenshots/Battles/002.jpg
http://www.dothack.com/gu/_images/screenshots/alkaid/004.jpg
http://www.dothack.com/gu/_images/screenshots/TheWorld/006.jpg
http://www.dothack.com/gu/_images/screenshots/Battles/005.jpg
If you want I can sub any of them out, for any of the other screenshots found on the dothack.com/GU website (as their all mostly the same size)
Edit: Should be able to get the Haseo Xth form in there ;) He prefer just Haseo, or a group?