Just finnished the video, here are some notes:
Complements:
Great presentation, all the GFX look great, and sets you apart from DYKG.
It was well written, the wording was nice and not to stiff.
Interesting fact as well.
Critiques:
- The video was a bit long for just that one fact, a 7 minute video telling you the clouds scroll, I was expecting other facts, and the other tid bit quickly skimmed over when you could have elaborated what was added, maybe something about the spike glitch or other revisional changes.
- I think voice recordings (With the on screen text) would help this a lot, it would speed up the pace of the video, and I think the small conversation at the end would benefit from being faster.
If you go with recording I suggest doing some practice or having someone in the room with you, With my Let's Play series, Power Plaid Plays, We have tons of sessions and we slowly grew more conferable with the mics, a lot of our earlier sessions were fairly stiff, and having someone to read the lines to helps to make it sound more natural than talking alone. Matt catches me a lot when I start a recording too corny or stiff and having someone two bounce off of, even if they are not in the video helps.
https://www.youtube.com/user/PowerPlaid
