You really need a tripod of some kind. You struggle with the camera a lot, which kind of interrupts the flow.
That is one thing. But if you are serious about those videos, you should probably consider learning some editing, also don't capture your gameplay video with a camera. That is what capture cards are for. Other than that great reviews.
And it would be nice to see some PC controllers, cause there are some great ones out there *cough* Logitech gamepads *cough*