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General Category => The Request Forum => Topic started by: Arseen on September 20, 2012, 04:20:28 PM

Title: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 20, 2012, 04:20:28 PM
I'm doing Englisified Vertical SNES covers.

First I'd need translation of the back box of Super Tetris 3:

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/680f272df6ab8d9944c184c11ec9978d971d8f6a6ddd34bc4df28039efe5ec0a6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?4k03uau6x9zx7fa)

Thank you for the one who helps.

I'll ad few more later.

Probably (+ few others):
- Super Bombliss
- Super Tetris 2 + Bombliss
- Super Tetris 2 + Bombliss Limited Edition
- Super BomberMan 4
- Super Bomberman 5
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: DarrienEmerald on September 20, 2012, 06:45:21 PM
Well, it's a little stilted and not quite perfect, but I'm still learning, so here's my take on it at least.  Also, as I've never played any of these (or even much Tetris by itself), I could be missing something obvious, but maybe someone else can pick it up?

Headline:
クラシックから最新モードまで, ぎっしりつまった究極のテトリス登場!
The Full Tetris Experience, from Classic to the Latest Mode, has arrived!

Body:
テトリスシリーズの最新作がついに登場! スーパーテトリス3にはシリーズ中最多のゲームモードが満載.
リニューアルされたテトリスクラシックを始め,ニュモードのマジカリスとスパークリスが用意されているぞ.
さらにテトリス史上初の4人対戦モードが入った[スーパーテトリス3]で,君も今日から眼れない!
The latest installment of the Tetris Series is finally here!  Super Tetris 3, packed with game modes from throughout the series.
Take on the Renewal Version of Tetris, then prepare for the new Magicaliss and Sparkliss modes. Finally, Super Tetris 3 also contains for the first time the simultaneous four-player Tetris Battle Mode!

Right Picture:
テトリスクラシック
Tetris Classic
元祖テトリスがスーファミで復活!
Tetris Returns in the Super Famicom Original!

Bottom-Left Picture:
マジカリス
Magicaliss
色でそろえる不思議なマジカリス
Wonderful/Miraculous Color Alignment/Arrangement Magicaliss

Bottom-Center Picture:
スパークリス
Sparkliss
ライトニングブロックでスパーク!
Blocks with Lightning Sparks!

Bottom-Right Picture:
ファミリーテトリス
Family Tetris
テトリス史上初の4人同時対戦!
First Ever Simultaneous 4-Player Tetris!
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 20, 2012, 06:52:51 PM
Thank you BIG time.

If nobody else can better this (by that I mean correct mistakes if they exsist), I'll use this for the back text with little modification.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: JDavis on September 21, 2012, 04:24:14 AM
I would think the Magicaliss and Sparkliss should be Magicaris and Sparkris (word play on Tetris)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: DarrienEmerald on September 21, 2012, 06:50:21 AM
I would tend to agree.  However, I'm a stickler for using any official English the game/show/book/whatever gives, and in the screenshots on the back you can clearly see "Magicaliss," and to keep in pattern, I went with "Sparkliss."  It's up to Arseen how he wants to do them though, I probably should have mentioned it in the original post though.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 21, 2012, 07:45:33 AM
Of course I take freedom in editing the text. ;)

And these 2 screenshots should make the things easy:

(http://www.mobygames.com/images/shots/l/455770-super-tetris-3-snes-screenshot-game-selects.png)
(http://coolrom.com/screenshots/snes/Super%20Tetris%203.gif)

Links if the hot links fail:

http://www.mobygames.com/images/shots/l/455770-super-tetris-3-snes-screenshot-game-selects.png
http://coolrom.com/screenshots/snes/Super%20Tetris%203.gif
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 22, 2012, 04:35:49 AM
Here is almost ready cover, whadda ya think?

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/a89a18df649dc559dd2e61d7372aca10edaa5b92f30298a576695c8517bcb9926g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?26eqmb2aiy0bfc7)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 22, 2012, 04:39:30 AM
Could I have these too translated,please and thank you.

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/619e707a160a7145b50d7361bb11de6a0c34ed532cc08874c697afa18eeac10b6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?hdsh87jnoxn5c2n)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/9b86d8f0997bb9149311fb98c94eaf4cb5211a50794e17dd96d3aa47d8a5f3eb6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?7b52wd47f7onq6w)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/a2bbde4215cf2c319b9782f05511392adf9629cf386de8a5e04e51ffbcd693736g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?zjh95cxlg4bjr56)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/8a7aec81455f42943de6988f7c07bee529d8dd80c9e69ec83055a56e2f0b55226g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?5b0njqyqch5fqvh)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/186c47fd79964f309ac6dc8e7cc2f59b3cbb6701f669048deea77ad5f9d2fbcc6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?bbrjdw7rjsgrj5q)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: JDavis on September 23, 2012, 05:06:07 AM
Eh, "liss" and "ris" is all the same in Japanese ::)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 23, 2012, 06:14:36 AM
Eh, "liss" and "ris" is all the same in Japanese ::)

Ok, but actual screenshots say "liss".

And I think Familiss and Magicaliss sound better than Famiris Magicaris.
Sparkris and Sparkliss sound both as good.

S ->

2.5 to 0.5 "liss" wins. ;)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: marioxb on September 23, 2012, 03:07:09 PM
Tetris Flash is just the Japanese version of the US Tetris 2.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 23, 2012, 03:30:45 PM
Tetris Flash is just the Japanese version of the US Tetris 2.

I know.

Just want accurate  (ish) back text as it's probably different than US text.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: wiggy on September 24, 2012, 12:49:47 AM
They say:

 "Why not pray winning fantastic Soopa Bombriss!?!?!  Such beautiful fantastic soul contains!  Prease enjoy wonder beauty!"

 "Oh Sooparoo Tet-oo-ris 2 prus Bombriss!!!  Itsa numbaroo one good time fun pray!!!  Iron Coooookarooooo!!!!!!!!"

 "Oh Sooparoo Tet-oo-ris 2 prus Bombriss, Rimited Edition!!!  Itsa numbaroo one good time fun pray!!!  Rimited time avairable!!!"

 "Tetris Battle Gaiden: Ninja Taissen Soop-ah Have It Now!!!!  Pray it now!!!"

 "Tetris: Frash!!!  Frash, oooh ahhhh, savior of da univoorse!!!


 You're welcome.

Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 24, 2012, 03:39:44 AM
They say:

 "Why not pray winning fantastic Soopa Bombriss!?!?!  Such beautiful fantastic soul contains!  Prease enjoy wonder beauty!"

 "Oh Sooparoo Tet-oo-ris 2 prus Bombriss!!!  Itsa numbaroo one good time fun pray!!!  Iron Coooookarooooo!!!!!!!!"

 "Oh Sooparoo Tet-oo-ris 2 prus Bombriss, Rimited Edition!!!  Itsa numbaroo one good time fun pray!!!  Rimited time avairable!!!"

 "Tetris Battle Gaiden: Ninja Taissen Soop-ah Have It Now!!!!  Pray it now!!!"

 "Tetris: Frash!!!  Frash, oooh ahhhh, savior of da univoorse!!!


 You're welcome.

Ha... ha... haaaaa

OK, I smirked.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: wiggy on September 24, 2012, 01:51:41 PM
I know you shot whatever it is that you guys drink over there through your nose,  especially when you got to Tetris Frash ;)
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on September 24, 2012, 02:41:52 PM
I know you shot whatever it is that you guys drink over there through your nose,  especially when you got to Tetris Frash ;)

Probably would have, but I was at work, and drinking (alcohol) there is not allowed.
Title: Re: Translation help needed.
Post by: Arseen on October 01, 2012, 07:29:03 AM
Please and thank you so I can finish these covers

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/619e707a160a7145b50d7361bb11de6a0c34ed532cc08874c697afa18eeac10b6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?hdsh87jnoxn5c2n)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/9b86d8f0997bb9149311fb98c94eaf4cb5211a50794e17dd96d3aa47d8a5f3eb6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?7b52wd47f7onq6w)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/a2bbde4215cf2c319b9782f05511392adf9629cf386de8a5e04e51ffbcd693736g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?zjh95cxlg4bjr56)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/8a7aec81455f42943de6988f7c07bee529d8dd80c9e69ec83055a56e2f0b55226g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?5b0njqyqch5fqvh)

(http://www.mediafire.com/conv/186c47fd79964f309ac6dc8e7cc2f59b3cbb6701f669048deea77ad5f9d2fbcc6g.jpg) (http://www.mediafire.com/view/?bbrjdw7rjsgrj5q)